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0 posted 2008-05-24 01:26 PM



In the deep, dark night
the moon is shining bright
we both held each other tight
gave ourselves the deepest sight

We killed the voice of intellect
we dreamed each other far away
I kissed his eyes, I kissed his neck
I turned his mind the other way.

We chased the future down the road
we left the past right far behind
the blazing silver of the moon
spotlight our love and left us blind.

We keep on travelling this endless road
try catch the moon and all the stars
and never get a bit of it
just light through our fingers runs.

The love my dear will follow us
I keep it deep inside my heart
but never this will showing up
'cause this was never meant to start.



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-24 07:05 PM


quote:
We chased the future down the road
we left the past right far behind



so you found yourselves in the moment!
Very nice passage.

The last line cuts the dream off ...
but you can still catch it if you give it a try.

Love,
Margherita

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