Open Poetry #42 |
One More Day |
K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
He warmed our hearts and filled our soul It is him we forever will long to hold Just once more I'd like to smell the sweetness he carried around so well I yearn to hear the laughter he'd spill No matter the sickness his body was filled His touch, his scent, and sweet little kiss are few of the things we always miss too young to know how much he meant such little time on earth he spent 5 short years just wasn't enough for this precious child so full of love to understand the cancer he fought is beyond anyones belief or thought They say with time the heart can heal Though I believe different with how I feel I know that we all must go some day But I can't help wishing for one more day!!! |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
that was beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Such a sad and tragic loss. Words fail me ~ yet, in spite of the emotional pain that you are undoubtedly ~ and obviously ~ experiencing, you did find the right words, and eloquent ones at that. Very expressive ~ very moving. I'm so sorry for your loss. Love and Eternal Light, EA |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Thank you all as always for your support. My words aren't always perfect, but sincere. I don't get a lot of time to stop in here, but truly enjoy everyone!! Thanks again!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Kris, Your words always touch me as only the words of one who truly knows the loss of a child can. Love, Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear KK, This is very sad. I hope it makes it easier to write about it. God bless you. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Kris that is a beautiful poem, so sad but very touching and I am so very sorry for your loss. I do feel that by sharing your loss with us it will perhaps ease the pain, I hope so. A big warm hug to you my dear. Lindsay |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Blessings to you. I can feel the ache of each line in my mother's heart. ((((( ))))) Love and Light, ~H |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This ripped my heart apart. So sorry for your loss. - Owl |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Thanks again for everyones support!!!! Rough weekend, but we spent it with the most wonderful memories. Bless you all!!!!! |
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