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K-K
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since 2008-03-13
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Indiana

0 posted 2008-05-23 10:13 AM


He warmed our hearts and filled our soul
It is him we forever will long to hold
Just once more I'd like to smell
the sweetness he carried around so well
I yearn to hear the laughter he'd spill
No matter the sickness his body was filled
His touch, his scent, and sweet little kiss
are few of the things we always miss
too young to know how much he meant
such little time on earth he spent
5 short years just wasn't enough
for this precious child so full of love
to understand the cancer he fought
is beyond anyones belief or thought
They say with time the heart can heal
Though I believe different with how I feel
I know that we all must go some day
But I can't help wishing for one more day!!!


© Copyright 2008 Kris Cross - All Rights Reserved
kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
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america
1 posted 2008-05-23 10:45 AM


that was beautiful
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-05-23 12:02 PM


Such a sad and tragic loss. Words fail me ~ yet, in spite of the emotional pain that you are undoubtedly ~ and obviously ~ experiencing, you did find the right words, and eloquent ones at that. Very expressive ~ very moving.

I'm so sorry for your loss.

Love and Eternal Light,
EA

K-K
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since 2008-03-13
Posts 153
Indiana
3 posted 2008-05-23 12:06 PM


Thank you all as always for your support. My words aren't always perfect, but sincere. I don't get a lot of time to stop in here, but truly enjoy everyone!! Thanks again!!
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2008-05-23 09:08 PM


Hi Kris, Your words always touch me as only the words of one who truly knows the loss of a child can.
                            Love, Ida
                                      

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 posted 2008-05-23 09:14 PM


Dear KK,

This is very sad.  I hope it makes it easier to write about it.

God bless you.

Bobby

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2008-05-23 11:58 PM



Oh Kris that is a beautiful poem, so sad but very touching and I am so very sorry for your loss. I do feel that by sharing

your loss with us it will perhaps ease the pain, I hope so. A big warm hug to you my dear.

Lindsay

unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

7 posted 2008-05-24 01:45 AM


Blessings to you.

I can feel the ache of each line in my mother's heart.
((((( )))))
Love and Light,
~H

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2008-05-24 04:12 PM


This ripped my heart apart.  So sorry for your loss.

- Owl

K-K
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since 2008-03-13
Posts 153
Indiana
9 posted 2008-05-27 12:51 PM


Thanks again for everyones support!!!! Rough weekend, but we spent it with the most wonderful memories. Bless you all!!!!!
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