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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-05-23 08:36 AM

Can we begin
again

as broken brances
weave together
remnants
of hollows squared

of knotted sinews
where our buried embers
lay,
once ignited
once flared

can we begin
again

or had we ever
really left
this place
we call Here

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-05-23 09:03 AM

"or had we ever
really left
this place
we call Here"

~ A cryptically clever closing, that I understand.

I do so enjoy your goddess ink.

Linda

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-05-23 10:39 AM

Hello Ink I always adore to read you...Great work..
Yann

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

3 posted 2008-05-23 03:12 PM

A beautiful poem, artistically and technically! A fine achievement that I enjoyed very much!

Art

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

4 posted 2008-05-23 08:55 PM

I have always admired the way you write. Beautiful!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-05-23 08:59 PM

Absolutely love that last verse.
Ida

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2008-05-24 12:32 PM

can we begin
again

or had we ever
really left
this place
we call Here

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I got the idea, in so many words, that he probably wouldn't be coming back.
I won't just be here because he changed his mind.  At the same time,
I will always be here for me and my memories.

Hugs, my Michele~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2008-05-24 02:34 AM

Good, Good, Good ...
.... Good Vibrations!

Ripples can come back on you

Ct

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2008-05-24 03:46 PM

OMG! (Oh My Goddess!)

That was just beautiful!

I'm not sure of which, "here" you write of, but as far as, this wonderful place, I don't think you can, leave. Who would want to? The people here are just too special.

So nice to read you again!
Rich

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2008-05-26 07:22 AM

thanks for stopping by

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