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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-05-22 06:15 PM


Times have changed
during the twilight
of humanity.

Certain things seem
to offer other people
different views and opinions.

It's like a human game of chess
different pieces of the strategic game
and certain king's and queen's need
to be sacrificed for the good
of the other pieces.

Maybe I'm just a pawn
to this gigantic charade
but that's ok
because soon the sacrificial ceremony
will erase the feeling
of vengeance.

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-05-22 09:53 PM


Yo Angel,

I like this, however, never sacrifice your King in chess.

Also never lose that feeling for vengeance.  Pawns often become Queens, the most valuable piece in chess.

Bobby

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