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Open Poetry #42
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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-05-21 08:03 PM

I'm exposed to the light of truth
its graceful touch rubs against the pigments
of my skin.

The light renews my body
restores youth to my skin
and dissolves dishonesty.

Then the shadow of lies
fights against the light of truth
the two create a new light
called the planet Earth.
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2008-05-21 11:35 PM

what a combination!
RC Langill
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since 2008-03-09
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2 posted 2008-05-22 01:06 AM

A strong interpretation of the timeless clash of light & dark.
RC Langill
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since 2008-03-09
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3 posted 2008-05-22 01:49 AM

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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4 posted 2008-05-22 10:08 AM

Yo Angel,

This is very good work.  It's not only wise in its words, but also very well written.

Bobby
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