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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-05-21 04:18 PM


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A contrail
Across the sky
Outside my window

Meanwhile
A willow
Equally capable
Of miracles

Welcomes Spring
With final offerings—

Leaves on the trunk
Of a fallen tree


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-05-21 06:01 PM


Very beautiful, dear John!

Especially love the image of the "leaves on the trunk of a fallen tree" ... such a will to live!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-05-24 02:41 AM


Beauty shines in the simplicity of your poetry.  You write with few words so well.

Alison

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