Open Poetry #42 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. A contrail Across the sky Outside my window Meanwhile A willow Equally capable Of miracles Welcomes Spring With final offerings— Leaves on the trunk Of a fallen tree . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful, dear John! Especially love the image of the "leaves on the trunk of a fallen tree" ... such a will to live! Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beauty shines in the simplicity of your poetry. You write with few words so well. Alison |
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