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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-05-20 04:53 PM

sometimes when you are in jeans
and untied shoes with too early on
after the hugs of fuzzy warm are done
and my mind falls into your bosom well
face down wondering how your laughter would feel

folded easy over the back of a chair
like those just right off in my mind jeans
with washed and wearable comfortable
slow danced fitted in boot cut or bare foot
or just propped up on a lap inappropriately perfect

somewhere in idaho or montana or next door
to nowhere else special any more
when those kind of mornings are not noticeable
and only the coffee and something else between us
is what you would whisper the sides off of

just to taste test the widest part of my smile

____________

daark

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

1 posted 2008-05-20 06:28 PM

I love to read your work. It is something to do with the way you take an overdone thing like the love poem, infused it naked sensuality and take your poems to heights unclaimed.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned" J.C. Macauley

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2008-05-20 07:25 PM

"somewhere in idaho or montana or next door
to nowhere else special any more"

dude you just keep hitting heart strings of me....loved this...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-05-21 06:08 AM

ms shyvl, thanks lady friend, I enjoy your eyes

_______________

ms suesea, thanks babe, a pleasure to keep your mind busy with nice place thoughts..

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2008-05-21 04:12 PM

You always make me smile. You always give me a warm fuzzy feel, too. I like your poetry, and I like this.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-05-21 04:54 PM

ms nan...you bless me with your smile and comments...thanks lady friend

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-05-21 06:36 PM

quote:
sometimes when you are in jeans
and untied shoes with too early on
after the hugs of fuzzy warm are done
and my mind falls into your bosom well
face down wondering how your laughter would feel

Such charming morning "hugs of fuzzy warm" induce me to believe in a day full of brightness and laughter.

Enticing.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-05-24 02:37 AM

D

Coffee, jeans and special times shared - makes for a puzzle that I would enjoy sharing pieces to.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-05-24 06:53 AM

ms mar, thanks lady friend

___________

ms ali-san, the places in our minds we all journey to when dreaming, thanks ms

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-05-24 09:10 AM

wonderful! Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2008-05-24 11:45 AM

good read

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