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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-05-18 09:54 AM


Burning the skin off
of myself
and the blood I bleed
is crystal blue.

Where as I cut
other people
and their blood is either
red or black.

My blood is crystal blue
but other's are different
and that's ok with me.

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r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

1 posted 2008-05-18 11:34 AM


found the poem interesting...but odd. i feel the poem needs to tell me more and i want to know more.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-05-18 11:40 AM


Angel, perhaps your blood is crystal blue because you truly ARE an angel, as your real name suggests!

I'm just the simple ole earthy type and my blood is down-to-earth red! lol

Intriguing write.


EA

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2008-05-18 01:37 PM


So, you're a Blue-blood?  Always wondered frome whence that moniker came!

Just funning...really like this piece, my friend.

jimmy

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-05-18 01:41 PM


Angel,

Welcome to the blue-blood crowd.

Bobby

Luskalilly
New Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 5
Kamloops, B.C Canada
5 posted 2008-05-19 10:11 AM


Luv ur poem buts great image in my head
shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
6 posted 2008-05-19 01:03 PM


If your blood is blue- is that similiar to blue-blooded or of a higher rank. That would make the red or black blood common, less rare. Is this poem to declare an affirmation of self.  
Just curious.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley

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