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house into poetry |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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House…1 -------- Four walls lift it on their shoulder. Sounds of rain dropping on it was the music My childhood likes most. A kite is dangling from its corner. Roof looks at its brilliant colors. I know that it would like to have a flight with it. House…2 --------- Run through the corridor and stumble. The dark red of bruise, Mother has gone to market And you will not tell father. Is it true that rebuke is painful Even more than a bruise? clever talks delay friendship! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
It's about your youth, about sadness and secrets; very enjoyable to read. Yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ku... I like your softness here... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ku, these are two gems and I felt as if I was an eye witness to every scene you painted here with your usual mastery. Your sensitive heart nudged you into poetry and I am so happy it did. This is a keeper ... and yes a rebuke hurts more than a bruise sometimes  .Love and hugs. Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done, my friend...glad I didn't miss reading this. jimmy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a tender touch here |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with RDB on this one!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Poetaddict New Member
since 2008-05-18
Posts 5 |
i loved it alot... you got talent though! |
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