Open Poetry #42 |
Earth Song |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Earth Song Sunrise In the tiny, translucent droplets of water shimmering from the soft touch of breeze, morning dew – kissing everything formally caressed by night – suddenly bursts forth in golden, fiery splendor; sunrise reflected . . . countless times, Dawn What is it heard, soft on an awakening soul? . . . A bird, and then more, each throwing forth his song till the sky is full of the glory. . . of a new day’s. . .life; and a baby cries for it’s mother’s milk, hushes as the nourishment comes, Earth awakened to the music of ancient songs, to the touch that causes the soul to shiver with joy, anticipation . . . love. Love – lingers and the Earth . . . Sings . . . ©wesley james beard, jr. may2008 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Jwesley, I like this. It follows the pattern of Virginia Woolf's "Waves". Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Wesley, this is a wonderful read and I read it in the right moment, just when the hush of night recedes to bring the sounds of a new day. Enjoyed this very much, absolute beauty! It makes me want to say a prayer of gratitude for the gift of a new day. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Jimmie, you sang Earth's song so beautifully! Absolutely divine! Loved it! Love to you and Mother Earth, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A joy to read...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wonderful earth song, Jimmy. Ida |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
always a pleasure to read you |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Wonderful images to make one catch one's breath. Pleasure to read. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
Great poem! loved it! "When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
always a pleasure to read your work, james...thanks for sharing. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
morning dew – kissing everything formally caressed by night – suddenly bursts forth in golden, fiery splendor; sunrise reflected . . . countless times, (sighs) how timeless and beautiful..... really, really enjoyed the bliss of this.... hugs Lee J. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*slow breath* Oh Jimmy.... you've done it again. Sometimes, you just leave me breathless yanno?? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding! |
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