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Immortal Vine by Sonnet
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Immortal Vine by Sonnet |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Immortal Vine by Sonnet The very depths of soul beseech one velvet meal In sate so ravenous to feed by destiny Besieged in freedoms pure enchantment, hungers zeal Two light of heart adorns iambic harmony As this my love, propounds the feast lest sin Whereby each soul is made impoverished to dine When we have found the garden sown, as weed grows thin With trembled lips so sweet to sip immortal vine Then this my praise, to rise above the surface course As you alone are but my thirst and hunger shed And free, so free, without undue reviewed remorse My needs fulfilled are just dessert when sweetly said My heart so full, ingratiates a banquets touch To feast of blessed rite and freedoms full as such Copyright Kkh 5/17/08 |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
believe this is my first experience reading your work...it was a very interesting experience. hope to see and read more in the future. #42 moves so quickly and i move so slowly. therefore, i miss soooooooo much. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh Kathleen, I don't know how you do it. The likes of Shakespeare's shadow is smiling right now, embracing your true gift, and so am I. Rich |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My, but we have certainly dropped a poetic surprise upon the lands around us...Perfect? No, NEVAH....WHY? because mine have never been perfect and I ain't gonna sit here and watch you do it.... Great write... |
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