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Jeremiah |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The town As it always was Farms and some Long fields already Harvested in the valley Beyond the Lower mountains Meeting blue With blue as usual At the horizon The western sea The grass grows high All the trees again Are deeply green Yes it’s been awhile Since I’ve been down For anything social And I’m sorry But actually here above Alone on the periphery Of other peoples’ lives There isn’t all that much To say . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (05-16-2008 11:13 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your poems have been deep and reflective lately. John. I have always enjoyed your writing but lately I feel that it has taken on a new and greater dimension. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is how I feel sometimes myself |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Sometimes when in deep contemplation, it is best that much isn't said, except for the calming voice of the heart. This poem touches me in a special way, and takes me to another place. Thanks, Art |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Again, beautiful - and ditto to what Ida said. A |
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