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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2008-05-16 09:08 AM



Climbing up the walls inside,
in dealing with my foolish pride.
Unearthing hidden splendor where,
it otherwise hung limp and bare.
Pain has dulled into a roar.
There's so much more of life in store.

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1 posted 2008-05-16 02:28 PM


Poignant write, Tina.
                 Ida

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2008-05-24 01:45 AM


Most beautifully expressed.

A

ctowen
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3 posted 2008-05-24 02:38 AM


The threshold of beginnings is just to the other side .....

          I've stumbled over it many times!!  : )


Nice write

Ct

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-05-24 12:56 PM


Hi Tina, this is a great work, thank you for sharing

  yann

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5 posted 2008-05-26 07:38 PM


nicely done...excellent write
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