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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-05-15 11:06 AM

Hands up
give me your money,
and then not
you are so attractive
hands up
give me your heart.

Hands up
give me your ring,
and then not
you are so sad
hands up
give me your concerns.

Hands up
give me your love
I am a bandit
as long as I see you.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-05-15 11:30 AM

That was downright adorable!!! Loved it!!!

EA

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-05-15 11:59 AM

cute poem, yann. Enjoyed.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-05-15 01:17 PM

Yo Yann,

This is well written, and humorous. It works for me.

Bobby

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2008-05-15 01:59 PM

I wish our criminals here had the same take on it as you! Thanks for the smile!

Helen

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

5 posted 2008-05-15 03:40 PM

Thief Of Love, huh. Neat switch in thought in each stanza. Loved it as usual.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned" J.C. Macauley

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-05-15 05:24 PM

Dear Yann, thanks for the smiles, this is cute indeed, but it holds more than superficial enthusiasm ... there is the offering of a heart that shines.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-05-17 03:43 AM

Yann.... I love this!! I'll put my hands up for you any day

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2008-05-17 04:25 AM

Thank you all my dear friends, your comments are a sun in this rainy day...

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-05-24 01:59 AM

Yann,

You are often the sun in my nocturnal poetry reading.

Wonderful writing!

Alison

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