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jade in blue vulnerable |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I tried not to notice your eyes when you whispered your skin music and stood by an ocean for hours showing him your smile sides you were jade and I was sand I found your footprints in my mind with nothing on nearly often but sometimes in less than sun I was the young warrior then and you were a woman without armor I prayed to your vulnerable god but you were nonchalant lovely and took me through the rooms where your colors changed often and you tempted with purpose fingers never looking at my eye names only through the window of my wanting _________________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your mind, dear D., is infinitely creative and blessed with unique beauty. This is another one to savor more than once, most definitely. Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D You are a story man who writes words lovely. I love waking up to your poetry. A |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and took me through the rooms where your colors changed often" I like that |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dark Stranger, Yeah, I like this one. It works well. Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks hon for your friendly eyes _____________ ms ali-san, thanks babe for looking in the windows _________________ ms suesea, thanks babe for letting me see your smiles back ___________________ bobbyJ, thank you so much Robert..you make me smile |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
only through the window of my wanting mmm...yes Mr Daark... these are my thoughts too! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, you do make me .....smile |
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