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Pitch Black Sea
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Pitch Black Sea |
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fitz1901 Junior Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 16Michigan, USA |
Pitch Black Sea It attaches itself like a cancer snaps my bones like twigs and I fall Dying, my life leaking on the ground I scream, struggle the rest of the population lies dormant We’re all living corpses floating on a pitch black sea But I lie awake I will persevere Break myself free You will blindfold me no longer I,like a child running through vacant hills hands outstretched joy overflowing will be free but lying on this Black Sea, Humanity Chants "Were all black when the lights are turned off" What happens when I turn the lights on? |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
The ending of your piece took a positive turn. Thanks for sharing. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
""Were all black when the lights are turned off" What happens when I turn the lights on?" ~ Hmmm, perhaps we all turn white?!? lol ~ Sorry, I couldn't help myself. May the sun 'Light'en your dark thoughts.   Earth Angel |
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