Open Poetry #42 |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
a shift in thought, idea, memory casual consciences follows years of sullen sleep. there is the slight nudge towards feeling that combine to ask for escape. all this time in confinement of walls, borders, doors locking away all freedoms. another small spike embeds itself into the shreds of a soul. what finds might come to the heart left alone for small passions of the skin. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
though this required multiple reads (at least for me) to get the right 'feel', I liked it...for that reason, if no other...my favorite part: "another small spike embeds itself into the shreds of a soul." |
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