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Open Poetry #42
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x-tears-x
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0 posted 2008-05-11 02:54 PM


Sweaty,
Sorrow cries my,
Precious water away,
And strangles perspiration from starved,
Organs.
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1 posted 2008-05-14 07:39 AM

And strangles perspiration from starved,
Organs

interesting imagery here. good cinquain
shyvl
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2 posted 2008-05-14 08:38 AM

"Sweaty,
Sorrow cries my,
Precious water away,"
this is a great image.
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