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Open Poetry #42

saturday and sunday

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-05-11 04:24 AM

1 Saturday road
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Busy to get back.
Ask them” whereto?"
They will only look at their feet.

2 Sunday road
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Simple road of lone Sunday,
a destination
that has no destination

clever talks delay friendship!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2008-05-11 07:47 AM

I like this!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-05-11 10:02 AM

With the addition of the Saturday road, the impact of forlorness is even greater, dear Ku!

Love,
Margherita

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2008-05-14 07:47 AM

a destination
that has no destination

ah. the wit in this line!

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

4 posted 2008-05-14 08:30 AM

very cryptic. good work
sharyn

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