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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india

0 posted 2008-05-11 04:24 AM



1 Saturday road
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Busy to get back.
Ask them” whereto?"
They will only look at their feet.

2 Sunday road
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Simple road of lone Sunday,
a destination
that has no destination

clever talks delay friendship!

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2008-05-11 07:47 AM


I like this!

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-05-11 10:02 AM


With the addition of the Saturday road, the impact of forlorness is even greater, dear Ku!

Love,
Margherita

kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2008-05-14 07:47 AM


a destination
that has no destination

ah. the wit in this line!

shyvl
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texas, usa
4 posted 2008-05-14 08:30 AM


very cryptic. good work
sharyn

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