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Open Poetry #42

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-02-06 05:11 PM

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All that goes well
With winter’s snow—
Warm sake

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-06 05:14 PM

I love Winter!

ARCTIC WIND

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-06 05:50 PM

I read this poem with a very interesting feeling. I had my first taste of sake on 1/27/08, in a friend's home. It was raining outside and the sake, I have read many times from your poem, was cold and flavorless. I wonder why you like it.

A glass of cold sake
Paled the mountain
In winter rain

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-02-06 06:03 PM

Huan Yi,

What you say is true. I love good sake, warm or cold.

Lovely little poem.

Bobby

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2008-02-06 06:23 PM

Sake to me. (I'm sorry!)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2008-02-06 08:49 PM

Tried it in the '60's...didn't much care for it. Haven't tried it since.

Like your write much better.

j.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2008-02-07 12:13 PM

'food' for thought, thirst, and levity apparently?!

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