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WindWalker
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0 posted 2008-05-08 11:55 AM


Perhaps only a chasing after the wind?
Perhaps the stubborn belief
in a timeless love on some undefined horizon?

Nevertheless this is the morning – chosen –
the early; the pure morning,
when still under the enchantment of dreams
I meet the woman I love in infinity –
or I create her (and why not?)
shaping her from the dawn’s clear light:
for me, there will be no more waiting.

In my vision
the slanted rays of the rising sun cast
her unmistakable shadow across mine,
both outlined in dew-speckled grasses.
How could this burning desire
not bring forth that which we call “real”?
For the reality of this vision –
whether of spirit or flesh
has already changed every part of my life.

I wonder:
in the process of changing one's life
through the manifestation of something good,
should one just sit still,
meditating on every possibility?
(Possibilities do not engender the new –
  only the tried and abandoned or failed.)

Should one keep moving like the wind
with new thoughts – impossibilities –
written with tears upon the rain,
yet powerful enough to warp the face of time;
to weave new patterns upon the fabric of space?

Hesitant I may be, yes, but not cowed by fear
of drastic consequences from unexpected results.  
I have desired her since the dawn of time
and now, I have seen her –
I won’t  turn away  from this event – not ever.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-05-08 12:17 PM


I believe you to be one with the powers of manifestation to bring your dream girl into your reality.


EA

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-05-09 02:10 AM


Love the way your mind works, WindWalker.
                                    Ida

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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3 posted 2008-05-09 12:04 PM


A very deep write, WW.  If you've seen her then she will "be" but perhaps not in this lifetime and that's something that none of us who dream are happy to accept.  Perhaps we have to learn patience but we can also sow seeds now (thoughts, desires, etc.)for when the time is right to harvest.  You think?

Helen

Sunshine
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4 posted 2008-05-09 04:11 PM


I love the way your mind works its words
in this one...deep, ponderful thoughts
portraying a quiet need for some
inexplicable possibility...

Brava!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-05-11 10:51 PM


Could happen...and life would never be the same...James
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-05-11 10:54 PM


Enjoyed...James
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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7 posted 2008-05-11 11:12 PM


"Should one keep moving like the wind
with new thoughts – impossibilities –
written with tears upon the rain,
yet powerful enough to warp the face of time;
to weave new patterns upon the fabric of space?"
Yes we should and we should keep dreaming beautiful dteams such as this one.  Thank you for sharing WindWalker
sharyn

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