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Ponder state
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Ponder state |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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So many tears I have inside That disappear and try to hide But they are stored and lie in wait To quench my hell and ponder state So many moments to myself The thoughts of left upon the shelf To gather dust and just grow old For that seems how the years unfold The joys are few and far between Until a verse within is seen It’s then a smile does cross my face And I am in that perfect place Hell may come and give me grief But words as healing give relief So one on one they join in dance Before I take another chance |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick, Again, your poetry moves pieces of my heart. You write with such beauty and emotion - and I think your message speaks to many. You are among my favorite poets here. Thank you for sharing you. A |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Well written. I like it. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Heck man...let's just chance it...what's to lose....enjoyed this.. j. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
So many tears I have inside That disappear and try to hide But they are stored and lie in wait To quench my hell and ponder state.... You let it out! ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
The joys are few and far between Until a verse within is seen It’s then a smile does cross my face And I am in that perfect place  I like to see you smile Rick! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very poignant poem old mate and so well written. You are like good wine Rick, you keep getting better with age, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Great cadence and wonderful heartfelt words...enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Practically perfect. You are one of my favorite poets. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, thank you for the visit once again my friend, wonderful to have you here. Connel, thank you for your time and comment, much appreciated. jwesley, wonderful to have you here, thank you so much for the visit and comment. Artic Wind, I will let it out my friend, just glad I have people around like you all to share with, thank you for that. Dear Roniece, I like to smile my friend, but there are many sides to life one does not show to others, a mask is the cover. Thank you again for your visit, it's great. Good seeing you here Lindsay, thanks for the comment old mate, much appreciated. Clang, so glad you enjoyed the write my friend, thank you for the visit and comment. Hi James, good to see you here, thank you for your reply, appreciated. RogueandPoet, I am so pleased you enjoy my words, I so enjoyed your words to me my friend, thank you. To you all my friends, again thank you, all of you give reason to share the soul. Bye for now. Rick |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this, Rick. Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful heart song. Have a gooday! sir. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
The mask slipped there Rick and you are all the better for it.....fine writing.... John |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hello Ida, great to have you visit my friend, thank you for tanking the time to reply, appreciated. TomMark, great to have you reply, you also have a great day and enjoy, thank you for the visit. Good to see you here John, the mask does fall at times and the truth of me does show, thankyou for the comment my friend, much appreciated. Rick |
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