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Alison
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0 posted 2008-05-07 03:00 AM




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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-05-07 03:53 AM


Perfect Ali... just perfect my lovely Ali-girl  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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2 posted 2008-05-07 11:29 AM


Another wonderful Duo from you, dear Alison!

I always feel like lingering in your visions ...

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-05-07 11:49 AM


Dear Alison,

This has a nice picture.  I don't think I care for muskrats.  I remember them from my days on the farm, picking field corn in the city sewage plant filter beds.  Big old slimy things as I remember.

Bobby

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4 posted 2008-05-07 02:05 PM


Alison

You honor Haiku...




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5 posted 2008-05-07 02:09 PM


ahhh....the solemnity of nature...you capture it so very well
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6 posted 2008-05-07 02:14 PM


Always enjoy your love of nature, Alison, Thanks for sharing with us.
                                 Ida

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7 posted 2008-05-07 04:51 PM


Nothing short of superlatives and applause for this one! I love the image and the simplicity of the poem that captures the mood of winter's passage into spring.

Art

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8 posted 2008-05-07 09:34 PM


Captain and Tennile's "Muskrat Love" shoulda been playing here...woulda fit perfectly...both beautiful...

j.

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9 posted 2008-05-07 10:15 PM


Ouuuu! lovely Picture!

Lovely Poem!

ARCTIC WIND

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10 posted 2008-05-07 11:10 PM


Alison! It is wonderful to finally be able to see your sweet, smiling face!!!!

A fresh, cool, peaceful scene captured 'photographicslly' and 'haiku-ically'! lol

Love the easy flow and freshness of the water ~ and your words!

Love and hugs,
Linda

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11 posted 2008-05-10 08:10 AM


Hello Alison, I almost missed this one, thank you for your beautiful work.


   yann

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12 posted 2008-05-10 08:14 AM


What peace in the natural world, you scribe.
Enjoyed this!

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