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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-05-06 09:51 PM



This flower of mine
Pure as crystal clear water
Pleasant fragrance so breath-taking
With divine movement from the wind

Raindrops on rose petals
Insinuate yet another rainy day
Which allows us to see beauty
Even if not on a sunny afternoon


Jess

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-07 01:15 PM


Yes, beauty can be seen always, even on rainy days.

Love this much.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2008-05-07 09:48 PM


Enjoyed this (as I do all) from you, my friend...seems I must have missed a few as haven't seen you pop-up lately, even if I am only in and out....

jimmy

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
3 posted 2008-05-07 09:56 PM


Nice write.  Much enjoyed.

Hugs Kimberly


Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-05-07 10:18 PM


Margherita is so Right!



ARCTIC WIND

ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
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5 posted 2008-05-08 09:48 PM


Thanks everyone for your comments.

The only reason you haven't seem my work is because I took a little break I guess. I didn't write for a while.

But thanks again.

Jess

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