Open Poetry #42 |
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Night Watch |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Night Watch Only the shimmering, translucent cloak of moonlit mist and stars upon these endlessly vigilant hills, transcends the march of lives and loves, sorrows and seasons, forever passing… (beyond the gates of our cavernous dreams) into time’s veiled, kaleidoscopic oblivion. ---b. e. adams (5/6/08) |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wish I had written: "kaleidoscopic oblivion" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
of moonlit mist and stars upon these endlessly vigilant hills,........................" Such beauty in words SHDP! ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, It's nice to see you up and about again. Where have you been keeping yourself? This is another good woodsy poem that's well written. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful, dear Bruce! And if oblivion was an illusion too? You are always captivatingly melancholic. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"kaleidoscopic oblivion" You always have such a special way with words, Bruce. Ida |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Each time I read one of your poems, I immediately look to the next with great anticipation. I've never been disappointed! This is simply marvelous! Art |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah...where you been hiding...missed your words, my friend... j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Ouah Bruce, another very fine writing, you're such an artist. yann |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I love looking through your poetry window - I see nature through your eyes and enjoy the beauty and emotion that it evokes in me. Thank you, my friend. A |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bruce, you have a gift! ~ and we at pip are fortunate that you share it with us! ![]() "(beyond the gates of our cavernous dreams) into time’s veiled, kaleidoscopic oblivion." ~ Dang, yer good! ![]() Linda |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
"into time’s veiled, kaleidoscopic oblivion" Wonderful !! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A very grand thanks...to all who commented on this 'penning!' ---Bruce |
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