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Dark Alleys |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Dark Alleys I tire of looking around corners down dark alleys where you might be so dark I can not see if you are there and have come to think that you hide away in some recessed doorway to watch for searching eyes Why must I persist in such a dangerous pursuit expose myself to the cold and the driving rain when I should be sitting quiet and warm exchange glances and hear murmurs of all the lines we had written but there is no one there is no one there? no one 050508 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I, for one, am glad of your persistance.  It's always good to read you, e. You've got this delicate edge that I appreciate very much. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
but there is no one there is no one there? no one that's how I feel most of the time, now~~  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very poignant write, dear Krawdad. Sending you a warm hug. Love, Margherita  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
your write is angst personified...so well done...so captivating |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
They say at some point you just have to give up. I disagree. Keep searching. "Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride |
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