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Felix Depressed
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Felix Depressed |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania 
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Felix is sitting on the curb mid-block in the early night. He’s having one of his depressed times. He’s got tears ready to drop from his eyes, and he’s wringing his hands. He’s not looking forward to the night, and he really wishes he didn’t have to do this, but he knows he must he has no choice. A car approaches slowly, Felix gets up, smiles, and waves his arm. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, Bobby, this is really so sad, it depresses me too! You succeed in touching the reader deeply by rendering the dramatic atmosphere so powerfully. It's impossible to remain indifferent. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Thanks for reading and being able to commenting. Yes, I think it's sad too. Felix has to do what he has to do. Love Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (05-05-2008 09:16 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is really sad to read Bobby... I'm sending some special hugs to Felix... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, As you know, Felix needs all the hugs he can get, and those special hugs are the best. Bobby |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I just send my hugs to Felix - it IS sad and it is nice to know that he survived this time and moved on to be a strong man. Love to you both, Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
dear Alison, Felix says thanks for your concern, and he hugs you right back. Love Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Vandana, Thanks for reading, and commenting. Love Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
There is a depth and complexity to Felix that I find appealing. I think it would be great for humanity if there were more like him in this world of easy moral relativism. Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, I'm going to study moral relativism. As you know, Felix hates what he has to do to live. It hurts physically. Felix has never hurt anyone, and never will. Felix is the victim of his clients, and society in general. Felix doesn’t do remorse. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (05-06-2008 08:36 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is indeed sad and depressing. Felix is a stong person to have survived this situation. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, That's the way it is out on the street. Felix is lucky to have made it. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Sad! ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Artic Wind, Hey, like you gotta do what you gotta do. Bobby |
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