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Open Poetry #42

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-05-04 09:39 PM

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Stupid
As it may seem
I miss you

Ah you
Fifty year old
Bag of bones

Sparrows
Are in the sky

And regardless
Of our seniority
A robin sings

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-05-05 08:49 PM

John,

This is very descriptive. Robins are that way, they just don't care. I like this loads.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-05-06 01:44 PM

quote:
And regardless
Of our seniority
A robin sings

It's because they know of the sensitivity and beauty of the hearts, regardless of their age.

Beautiful!!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-05-06 04:35 PM

Nice...James

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