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Common Plea
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Common Plea |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Common Plea As daylight, so you are the sun Limitless, dimension radiant by one As strong an influence as air The sustenance of rain to bear My words succumb, the weightless of intensity To dedicate the volume nor the density As crossed my mind, and stuttered then Stay, stay near and warm these hours when And yet, I would not trim these wings Say these things too heavy to be heard We speak without the mutter of a single word You know, and though it seems too good A common thing I’ve always understood Whatever is the brightness of my life Attributed to feelings fleet and rife Then stay, stay forever and a day For I have known the Eastern rise as dawn As daylight, so you are the sun Copyright Kkh 5/3/08 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The endless beauty that you write so elegantly, brings tears to my eyes. It is that breathtaking!!! You upstage yourself time and again TD, and you never fail to move me. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was absolutely heavenly. I like the way you worked with your phrasing and imagery to come full circle. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Just Lovely TD ARCTIC WIND  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A sacred atmosphere manifests in your awesome words that touch my heart deeply, dear TD. Sublime. Love, Margherita  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh Kathleen, this is how I remember you. A poet's talent I could only aspire to. This is, a Diamond, and so are, you. Rich |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "We speak without the mutter of a single word" Wonderful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD "We speak without the mutter of a single word" ~ Communing in silence with unutterable beauty.  EA  [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-04-2008 06:00 PM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ah...the beauty of this piece...found it while looking for something else...must have missed it before...sure glad I found it...much enjoyed |
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