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On Nights Without You
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On Nights Without You |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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 On Nights Without You Can you picture me Sat here whilst yearning As I pour out my heart A solitary candle burning In the flickering flame My vigil by a candlelight Feelings start to flow Heart breaking as I write In the candlelight glow Lonely nights I had spent Writing letters of love Which shall never be sent Slowly the candle melts Words you would not see On nights without you Tears I have shed silently Hope©2008 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yea, it's difficult to know what to do with our emotions sometimes. Love is such a wonderful feeling, I just wish it wasn't so complicated. Your poem tugs at the heart of the matter. Nice writing, Hope~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautifully expressed feelings Hope... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
great work i love reading a good poem. wonderful emotion. i am always looking for a new poem to read. |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
"Can you picture me Sat here whilst yearning As I pour out my heart A solitary candle burning" was my favorite part but its all wonderfull. "Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If someone ask me if I was lonely, and at that moment I was, I would tell them its better not to think like that...James |
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