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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-04-29 10:34 PM


The evil deeds of many men soil my hands,
civil blood brings only civilized death,
what will it take for them to understand,
that I will suddenly take my final breath.
for no one will hear me scream again,
as I sail to my death on this sad bark,
for the sea is the tears that fuels my pen,
and the boat is what brings me to the dark;
Then reality smacks me on my face,
and things are seen by me in clarity,
and I'll smash this feeling with my mace,
of might, power, disrespect and authority.
As long as I have my will I wont fear
and I will continue to live, year after year.

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2008-04-29 10:40 PM


Yo Angel,

I'm all for "might, power, disrespect"

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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2 posted 2008-04-29 10:44 PM


So am I :-D LOL
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-04-30 06:12 PM


Angel... you have talent my friend...keep writing for us please....love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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