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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sounds of latent uniformity bundle themselves in diversity loosing the bonds of helplessness choosing chains of progressiveness sifting softly, sipping sweetly from the fountain of multiplicity are you there? the soft voice pleas as it calls beyond the lees remaining in the accent of the soul falling short of its nuance to the goal sharing, caring...simply daring to look beyond the stream of variety |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
beautiful and eloquent. I love the way your rhymns are so flowing. sharyn |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, I am here. ~ Reading and enjoying your fine poetry as per usual!  "Are you there?" ~ Oh, yes! Indeed you are! ~ and with your ever-present poetic presence of mind!  Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sharyn and Linda, thank you for your very kind comments (btw, nice alliteration, Linda) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you ~ And I liked your alliteration, as well! ~ "sifting softly, sipping sweetly" Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is good. I so understand what you are saying. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Ida, thank you...love it when someone 'gets it'  |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
Ver nice. it flows so well. "Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"...from the fountain of multiplicity", like this line a lot... well done.. j. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
are you there? the soft voice pleas as it calls beyond the lees remaining in the accent of the soul falling short of its nuance to the goal Quite a bit to ponder over. Very nice! Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful Steaven! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
j, thank you for your kind comment Richy, ponder away…thank you kindly RDB, you are so gracious…thanks |
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