Open Poetry #42 |
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How rich is rich enough |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I walk down by the sea and watch the morning sun rise over a placid pink mirror of water before the first breeze of the day. I sense the powerful interplay of fire and water upon my eyes: it’s pleasant enough to contemplate these arch-rivals creating such a beautiful canvass on this summer morning. If indeed we live in a world whose soul is duality does that not create a “biological imperative” whereby opposites must continually assert their oppositition? Does “duality” – the juxtaposition of opposites – endlessly create inequality? Or should it naturally create equality of opposites? Or does it make a difference to the outcome? What would happen, I wonder, should these two ever meet and touch? Ah, but that’s it, isn’t it: they cannot touch, will not, ever – and that explains the problems of earth; of man: of rich and poor and injustice. For the rich insist on touching the poor, robbing them of life with every touch; with exploitation and oppression. And the poor likewise believe that only upon touching the rich can they alleviate their own burden – so we have revolutions, we have wars. Is this violence a necessary aspect of creation’s concept of duality? Is there a better way? |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This begins in incredible imagery : "I walk down by the sea and watch the morning sun rise over a placid pink mirror of water before the first breeze of the day. I sense the powerful interplay of fire and water upon my eyes: it’s pleasant enough to contemplate these arch-rivals creating such a beautiful canvass on this summer morning." But what is even more powerful is the way you use your words to examine the mysteries of this world's injustices. Excellent piece. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You pose some interesting, thought-provoking questions and did so, quite eloquently. When it comes to the yin and yang of life, ofttimes it is a case of "never the twain shall meet". In a perfect world, I believe equal doses of each would result in perfect harmony. ![]() EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed your thoughts, and others were right that these are very interesting and good questions that we need the anwsers for! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting thoughts WindWalker. I think maybe you are a little ahead of your time. I hope we get a chance to catch up with you. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
WindWalker, In answer to your question; No, there is no better way. The greed of the rich is insatiable, and always has been. That’s why they are rich. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thought-provoking piece as always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I'm sure that the rich will always make sure we have the poor among us...for how did they get rich except by taking from others and leaving some with nothing...James |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This is a very strong and beautiful piece WindWalker… Of course I had a good idea it would be before I even opened it. Tammy<333 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks WW. It's always good to read your thoughts. |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
Thought provoking and wonderfull. "Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I believe we humans have the capacity to transcend to unimaginable heights, if only we survive long enough to evolve above creeds and slogans as the compass to guide us upon the yet uncharted sea of life. Fantastic poem of great importance! Thanks, Art |
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