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The Decision to Listen
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The Decision to Listen |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
I listen and wait for a word to sound but it seems the volume is turned down. I stand at attention waiting for that voice but it never came to guide me to the right choice. I try to hear through the deafening tone of silence but the only thing I hear, is death and violence. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, maybe it is time to change the station and listen for, and to, something else. The choice really is yours and there is a lot of beauty in the world. Just a thought, you know. Don't squander life on waiting. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The "voice" is inside you, sometimes the noise from outside keeps you from hearing it. Your poetry makes me think you will find it. Ida |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Hmm, I really don't know what made me write this poem, I was like forced to by something >.> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I got a chuckle out of the reply that you wrote. That happens to me at times, as well! lol  EA |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
:: laughs :: Yeah, me too. Unfortunately sometimes. A |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
LOL =D We are alike, amazing huh? |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I liked the ryhming couplets best. It was a pleasure to read and ponder sharyn |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I have had the same thing!-- writing a poem that just comes from the hand of the poet, not even knowing what you are writing! Very interesting huh?  ARCTIC WIND |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Yes, it's very interesting. I wonder if their is a science behind poets... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yep, my thoughts sometimes too! ok, well without the violence attached!  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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