Open Poetry #42 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. God I love The color blue The sea The sky And somehow you . |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Beautiful song. Which reminded me of Countess Blueskaya ![]() |
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tnhness Junior Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 15 |
ha! that's great. god i love the sea too. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Very subtle poetry, i enjoy it. yann |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
John, I love this because it shows a bit of the inside of you. I enjoy your poetry a lot. Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love the color blue myself!--Which is funny because I love the element water! Wonderful write Huan Yi .... ARCTIC WIND ![]() |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Love the way you write some simple yet filled with such intense emtions. sharyn Looking forward to more from your pen. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Loved the poem. It was very witty and to the point, an enviable skill indeed. Much love for blue ![]() ~J. [This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (04-28-2008 03:50 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Again you say so much with so few and just blow me away… Tammy<333 |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, here's one I've missed.....it's a pleasure to read you again, my friend. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I love a short poem that's long on substance. This one is a real beauty! Art |
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