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say not words |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what gate opens at life’s beck and call or how beats the drum of pending pall where shines the glisten of lore’s gleam or when does heavy weigh, with harshness stream and the stars fall from out their place as sadness secrets through time and space and the moon shines pale and dims her light as sorrow drifts through the tepid night o say not words of dark repose and rest not in laughter-less prose so lift the heart and dwell in bright and lift the eye to see such sight for in the darkest, deepest depths resides the shine in fairest fullness |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoy your poetry, Steavenr. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you, Ida...that is always nice to hear |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A gentle reminder that the best way to see majestic heights, is with the eyes and heart lifted up.  |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Beautiful. I say that this was pre-Sonnet. and it has wonderful sound. I wish I know a lot of poetic terms. pending pall glisten.....gleam heavy weigh....harshness stream sadness secrets...... space see such sight darkest, deepest depths fairest fullness beautiful sound. enjoyed very much the read. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very nice work, some words i didn't know, i had to check a dictionary... yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do so love your poetry! ~ It's truly poetic! lol  A pleasure to read!!!  Linda |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
beautfully crafted verse as always. I wish I knew the correct terms as well, so I'll settle for perfectly lovely. sharyn |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Absolutely beautiful... Tammy<333 |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
Good rhyming. I admire those who can rhyme well, I have issues with trying to rhyme lol |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, thank you for that gentle reminder Seoulair, thank you for notating your favorite parts 2islander2, well, I’ve heard it said that vocabulary is the foundation of success—thanks Linda, appreciate your kind remarks…thank you sharyn, you are always so kind…thanks Tammy, brevity is the soul of expression…much appreciated AAB, thank you kindly—rhyming is just relating in lyric form |
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