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Goodbye |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
For a friend of mine who i never noticed always said, "take it easy", "later" and "peace" when he left and i never noticed until i actually heard him tell me goodbye one day. I havent talked to him since  Goodbye. You never once said goodbye, ‘Till that final farewell When I didn’t even get To see a final smile. I knew your words Though a lie Would hold true That this was good bye. I never noticed, Took for granted for long That when we parted You never once told me "bye" So your words pierce my heart Yet I admire your courage That you forced yourself To say your goodbye. [This message has been edited by AAB (04-24-2008 11:03 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
AAB, This is coming right along. I think you perhaps mean “took for granted”. Keep up the good work. Bobby |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Yes it does often take courage to finally say Goodbye. Keep writing. Enjoyed it. sharyn |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
A final goodbye… Sad and heart-felt. Tammy<333 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I have Never seen your poems before! WELCOME TO PIP! ARCTIC WIND |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
thank you all for the positive feed back and the edit  |
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