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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-04-23 06:05 AM



Over and over without any measure, I don’t count the time or the effort spent.
Reason for reason and no one the wiser, I don’t see the point or the difference.

Only the faces of people the people, reach out look in.
Only the traces of quiet desperation each soul held within.

Further and further from where it all started the focus will shift to the latest craze.
Letter for letter conveyed and imparted insights and opinions become a maze.

Only the far side the exit the exit, step out look in.
Only the promise suspended beyond us, and our web of sin.

Older and older retracing the pattern through dwindling order’s descending curve.
Season for season and none their own master, I don’t see the truth in their empty words.

Only the faces of people the people, Reach out look in.
Only the darkness complete and consuming, let light begin.

Rick Delmonico

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shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
1 posted 2008-04-23 07:20 AM


Nice verse.  I like the way you chose to rhymn and stuck with it.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-04-23 07:39 AM


"Let light be ... let light begin" ... wise and beautiful thoughts.

I like the rhythm too.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-04-23 07:41 AM


I agree with Marhgerita! Interesting and creative write too



ARCTIC WIND

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