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something in windows..with feet on glass
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something in windows..with feet on glass |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were in different rooms more often than together in anymore places folding our envelopes with elbows wondering if the mail would come on our own special holidays kicking the music into mouths of old style smiles the kind from next door windows we had seen fast moving but seldom from stop signs we wore each others skins like shirts with tattoos on the sleeves rolled up to maintain originality but we knew what was there inside each others secret finger folds like it was our own saliva we tasted when licking our thumbs to turn pages hoping the books would never end or get boring enough to close even though we knew the endings like yesterday's horse race videos ________________ daark |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Deep and mysterious as always Love the lines "we wore each others skins like shirts with tattoos on the sleeves rolled up to maintain originality but we knew what was there inside each others secret finger folds" I could relate and they seemed so quintesentially you. Thanks for the pleasure sharyn [This message has been edited by shyvl (04-23-2008 07:21 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms shyvl, thank you lady!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
we wore each others skins like shirts with tattoos on the sleeves rolled up to maintain originality but we knew what was there inside each others secret finger folds --------------------------------- Alwaya a pleasure to read you D.  That stanza was my favorite but then again, you knew it would be though. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear D., there is something about "feet on glass" and "boredom" that makes me feel slightly uneasy ... there is a touch of melancholy in this one. "Endings" should never be considered, but then we do fear them, even when we are at the peak of joy, we can never completely ignore the endings ... good to know there will always be new beginnings! ... as well as new books to be enjoyed! POET, I love to read you. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hmmmmm and ummmmmm It doesn't hurt that I'm listening to Rod Stewart's Stardust album, does it? and that it's raining outside? and that I see fog on the windows?  |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This one makes me feel kind of sad Mr. Daark… In a reminiscent sort of way. Beautiful as always… Tammy<333 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe for the read ____________________ ms mar, thank you lady friend for touching this __________________ ms sun, thanks for listening and wearing the rain ________________ ms larrysmomtam, thanks for looking in...much appreciated |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Always good. enjoyed. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Maybe my melancholy mood is floating over your poem - but it made me cry. A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Maybe my melancholy mood is floating over your poem - but it made me cry. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, this is a wonderful read Mr Daark... my sweet Ali-girl, I'm sending you a (hug) x love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend seoulair, thank you _______________ ms ali-san, it is not a sad one...perhaps it is just the weather there...thanks babe __________________ ms r&b, thanks ms |
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