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vandana
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0 posted 2008-04-22 06:37 PM



I feel you
I feel love
I feel everything
I feel the heart beat
Next to mine
I feel fine,
When you hold my hand
When you told me
Before I could tell you
You tell me
How you feel for me?
I feel you
I feel everything is gonna
to be fine
I feel that
you are fine
And will be mine
Everything I feel
I never felt this before
I never felt this love
Before
Never felt this good
In my life before
I feel loved
And fine



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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-04-22 06:42 PM


Romantic Indeed!


ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
2 posted 2008-04-23 07:28 AM


Such sweet emtions spoken from the heart.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-04-23 07:41 AM


Ahhh, dear Vandana, when we can say "I never felt like this before" then we are truly blessed and know we LIVE and FEEL deeply.

Just beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2008-04-23 05:12 PM


Young love is wonderful...

and it's such a pleasure
to see you so bright and happy!


steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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5 posted 2008-04-23 05:51 PM


I feel the visual shape of your poem speaks volumes, but, alas...I am not wise enough to decipher its speech
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