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I Could Swallow the World with that Yawn
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I Could Swallow the World with that Yawn |
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shaggy New Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 9 |
I would like everyone to know that being a new member all the responses I've received are very much appreciated. I didn't expect such a great welcome and I look forward to reading all your poetry. That backdrop of ‘Let’s forget the world’— Turned into that Goodnight feeling, Of how nebulas explode When our bodies collide. And we take deep breaths Under a seizure of colors— So to fill ourselves With warm embrace Of renegade comets And swirls of galaxies, Only, I realize Under this cosmic dance Your eyes— Brighter than the emeralds Off the shore Of the Milky Way— Hold me to you And I feel These strange words, Mouth forming syllables— I’d swallow The world, With my yawn— If you only asked. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Excellent write Shaggy… Very sensual. Tammy<333 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
charming write with great visuals |
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shaggy New Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 9 |
I was going for sensual with this poem and I spent quite a bit of time working on the images so thank you both for the replies. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like your writing, Shaggy. Interesting name. Ida |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 love it.and welcome, since I seem to have missed your entrance (if I didn't miss it, don't tell me, old age is depressing enough without tangible proof).. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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