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Slip-Slivered Moon
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Slip-Slivered Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Slip-Slivered Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Silky soft shush of a slip-slivered moon Sashays silently o'er silver-tinged sky Soon lovers seek this serenade of swoon Silkiest soft shush of a slip-slivered moon~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely Marge. Slithers slipperly on the tongue. Love, Joyce |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Am I supposeed to read this 3 times real fast? It sounds like a tongue twister but it's an apt poetic description of that slivered orb. Rae |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL~ You gals just reminded me of my own giggles this morning~ Driving over to keep little Landry Leigh this morning, there sat that sliver of moon, just hanging in the new morning sky~ The words flew ... and I walked in the house looking for a pen to write them down~ Saying them over and over to not forget them, I did laugh at the 'slippery' feel of them~ Glad to know it will make a good 'read aloud' piece~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis.....What a Somnolant Slither of silent silver song. You know how much I love that kind of moon! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How beautiful this is, Marge. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Silently savoring the moon in silver solitude! Betty Lou |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow, read this one slowly or you'll get your tongue all twisted up and have to go to the emergency room. Well done, Marge. Ida |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Love it Marge |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Marge Tindal, Good work on this lovely poem. The rhyme is excellent. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Tongue Twister!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm a sucker for alliteration! ~ and the moon! So in my books, this poem is a double hitter!  Love & Lunar Light, EO |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
always beautiful. dear lady. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful vision, captured with your usual mastery, dear Marge. love and hugs Margherita  |
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