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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-21 12:24 PM


Like The First Time we Touched

In a perfect world we would
be together forever,
or perhaps not, because
nothing seems to match
the desire and anticipation
of coming back together
after a season of separation,
always finding our love
and appreciation to be
as strong as before,
and as we come together
and look into
one anothers eyes
its heavenly,
like the first
time we touched.

JamesLee
18April
2008


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Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
1 posted 2008-04-21 12:54 PM


James, this is beautiful... So soft and romantic.

Tammy<333

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2008-04-21 01:59 AM


who said the first time ever ended?

First are forever!

Nicely done

Ct

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-22 03:56 PM


goood!!
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-04-22 04:07 PM


Love sweet love as home sweet home...

       Thanks

   yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2008-04-22 06:36 PM


thenk you Larrysmom, ctowen, seoulair and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...James
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