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Open Poetry #42

Be your man

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2008-04-20 12:14 PM

What does it take to be your man?
I look in your eyes imagine if I can
How such beauty can be captured held by my side
To have and to hold in your heart reside
Sweep the cobwebs of a tragic time
Search my world to help you find
Help me be just steps away
No better start than here today
I cannot remove the pains that hide
But can find a way to heal with time
And put the pieces back in place
Restart our life in some new way
To give you peace of mind

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-20 04:48 PM

good. Good love song.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2008-04-20 07:20 PM

Thanks Seoulair
Reread what i wrote does have a song feeling to it. I'm pleased to hear that

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