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Open Poetry #42
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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
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0 posted 2008-04-19 09:30 AM




Burning Shooting
Twirling Turning
Creeping Crawling
Numbing Hurting
Bruising Pulsing
Hiding Waiting
Taking Taking
Taking Taking


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Mountain Goat
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since 2008-04-06
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High Places
1 posted 2008-04-19 10:44 AM

This has very sinister undertones. Cleverly written! Chilled me, for one!
Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-04-19 11:08 AM

interesting.  It can be read in many ways.
2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-04-19 11:11 AM

Hi Tina, I guess you took this photo in France before a boulangerie...

in france Pain means bread...

However i enjoyed your rythmic poem...

  yann
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