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Open Poetry #42

Shadows

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-04-19 03:30 AM

Closing tides
Currents flow
Reflecting highs
Revealing lows
Times of sun
And of rain
Some of shadows
Do remain

Copyright©2008 Victor Duna all rights reserved.

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shyvl
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since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

1 posted 2008-04-19 03:55 AM

beautifully spoken. Into each life comes a bit of shadow/ Pieces of the past no doubt. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-04-19 04:12 AM

Victor... I do like this!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-19 11:28 AM

how right. life's true picture.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

4 posted 2008-04-19 11:38 AM

Nice :] So simple yet has so much meaning.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-04-19 11:39 AM

very fine poem. Enjoyed it.
yann

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Pluto

6 posted 2008-04-19 03:58 PM

Thank you all for reading and commenting! : )

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