Open Poetry #42 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes it is in your voice that sound of something special in that know only we know place where our breathing plays with new rhythms and each other and our hands are our own kids somehow partly grown and exploring wondering about things and feelings and what if we touched here or there when the sky was on or again when it was off and had its night strings attached to everything else that we could feel ____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-13-2008 07:15 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sometimes ... dear D., the emotions you convey in your masterful poems, like this one, are simply overwhelming. Some true poetic heights here! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, shiver me timbers! ~ and shivering they be! You be no stranger to the sensuous art of tantric love ~ and poetry. EA |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ya know, reading your poetry is like stepping on the edge of decadence. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for your touch _________________ ms ea, thank you for the tantralizing reply ___________________ ms ali-san, thank you for bringing candy to the images babe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful Mr Daark.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&B, thank you babe, welcome back |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sometimes it is in your voice that sound of something special in that know only we know place" for reals.... I love this part |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
daark, your writing takes me into a realm beyond words...into a place of touch and feeling. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe, you bless me _____________ friend rv, humble thanks...am pleased there is a reward for your eyes in my pen.. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This one sent my mind in several directions trying to apply it to myself!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel...sometimes you need to turn slowly, let yourself reveal YOU in the mirrors..thank you for modeling this number |
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