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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-05-13 05:59 AM


sometimes it is in your voice
that sound of something special
in that know only we know place

where our breathing plays
with new rhythms and each other
and our hands are our own kids

somehow partly grown and exploring
wondering about things and feelings
and what if we touched here

or there when the sky was on
or again when it was off
and had its night strings attached

to everything else that we could feel
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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-13-2008 07:15 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-05-13 06:25 AM


Sometimes ... dear D., the emotions you convey in your masterful poems, like this one, are simply overwhelming.

Some true poetic heights here!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-05-13 10:16 AM


Well, shiver me timbers! ~ and shivering they be! You be no stranger to the sensuous art of tantric love ~ and poetry.


EA

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3 posted 2008-05-13 09:20 PM


Ya know, reading your poetry is like stepping on the edge of decadence.

Alison

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-05-13 09:32 PM


ms mar, thanks lady friend for your touch

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ms ea, thank you for the tantralizing reply


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ms ali-san, thank you for bringing candy to the  images babe

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-05-17 04:03 AM


wonderful Mr Daark..  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-05-17 07:05 AM


ms r&B, thank you babe, welcome back
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7 posted 2008-05-17 12:23 PM


"sometimes it is in your voice
that sound of something special
in that know only we know place"

for reals....



I love this part

r v wooo
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8 posted 2008-05-17 01:23 PM


daark, your writing takes me into a realm beyond words...into a place of touch and feeling.
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-05-17 01:39 PM


ms suesea, thanks babe, you bless me


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friend rv, humble thanks...am pleased there is a reward for your eyes in my pen..

Angel4aKing
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10 posted 2008-05-17 02:01 PM


This one sent my mind in several directions trying to apply it to myself!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-05-18 07:13 AM


ms angel...sometimes you need to turn slowly, let yourself reveal YOU in the mirrors..thank you for modeling this number
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