Open Poetry #42 |
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Felix and The Roses |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Felix is sick of all “The Man’s” empty promises. “Keep your nose clean, and you can smell the roses”. Well, Felix doesn’t know what a rose smells like. Knowing the man, and all his lies, Felix thinks that’s probably not a good deal anyway— just another line of malarkey from the man. Then suddenly, out of the blue, Sally gives him a bouquet of yellow roses. He likes the smell of the roses, and more than likes the smell of Sally— yeah, that’s okay. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
How nature works!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Seoulair, You've got it. Human nature is like that. It's the best kind of nature. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased you liked the poem. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
That's because Felix is really an old softy inside. Felix acts tough but some of us understand Felix as he really is. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ida, Now don't be spreading that around. I can't afford to lose my street rep. Bobby |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Life like roses needs to be experience to be appreciated. Glad Felix got the chance to smell the roses. Pleasure to read sharyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Sharyn, Roses are nice to visit, but I wouldn't want to live with them. Felix's small, city, backyard is tastefully covered with concrete. That's the way he likes it. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah roses are my favourite Bobby! I'm pleased for Felix that he got to experience their beautiful fragrance and that Sally was the one to give them to him... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Yes, Sally is a peach that way, very romantic. Of course, you know, Felix has a problem with the love thing. It gets awkward. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am glad Felix was given the chance to see and feel the overwhelming beauty of a rose and of the bringer of the rose. I tell you Bobby the "concrete" of your backyard would enjoy to be given the chance to display some of the godgiven beauty in form of plants and flowers ... God Himself manifests in the flowers. I know of course of men's nature, which can bring along the need for shields that make us almost unreceptive of nature's beauty ... but there is immense healing power in it. Thought provoking as usual and well written. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Bobby a very good writing as always with Felix...Flowers have inspired a lot of poets perhaps cause of them was revealed poetry. have a nice day yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Margherita, Thanks for your thoughtful advice on flowers, and gardening in general. Unfortunately, Felix and I have rather overwhelming negative memories when it comes to gardening. Flowers every now and then are very nice. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Yes, flowers are okay, every now and then. Thanks for the kind words on this one. Bobby |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
I told you Felix cared… Tammy<333 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Tammy<333, Yes, Felix cares a lot about Sally, and flowers are okay, as long as he doesn't get involved in raising them. Bobby |
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