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Open Poetry #42

words without motion

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2008-04-18 05:23 AM

Did fear make you forget
does your heart now fill with regret

Is that why you left
left me crying here by myself

Was it a moments doubt
Then your heart just gave out

Or a million feathers fall
Or a single words stab

That found me here on the floor
bleeding and screaming for more.

Do i long for the end
For the simple joy of pretend

Can i bring myself to believe
'Oh how i wish we never met'

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-04-18 06:13 AM

oh there is a lot of sadness in this write Paul... you have expressed your thoughts well... I hope sunshine and smiles will grace your days again soon...... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-18 04:06 PM

This indeed, very sad. strong emotion.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2008-04-20 06:43 PM

ouch...

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

4 posted 2008-04-20 07:38 PM

This is filled with emptiness, sadness and pain… Beautiful.

Tammy<333

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

5 posted 2008-04-20 08:13 PM

filled with longing and regret. So sad.
sharyn

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