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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Will you see the beauty of this sport, the never ending move of the jerseys, the roaring painted helmets the abstraction of the loops the skating with no purpose at all but devouring the philosophy of a ring, Will you feel the time that freezes the thoughts of the spectators, Will you see the constant ballet of the hockey players as a magic show teaching me that nothing matters except to crosscheck the emptiness of my life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
teaching me that nothing matters except to crosscheck the emptiness of my life. Yann, I found these words to be very powerful.. enjoyed.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most effective 'write'... this impressionistic slice might almost make me a hockey fan... I am particularly fond of: "Will you feel the time that freezes the thoughts of the spectators..." applause!! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Chère adorable Roniece,there is no doubt our lives have no value compared to the immensity of the world so we must not to have scrupules and enjoy it with all the simple pleasures we can.... thank you for your nice comment... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bruce, thank you for your comment, i made some expreience last evening, i looked a hockey game like an abstract piece, letting my eyes follow the movement of the jerseys like I would have follow the move of a fish in an aquarium...It was artful and made me happy without any kind of presssion... I know i would not watch all the games this way but I wanted sharing that.... I don't know either were you live but in some US towns there are terrific games.... Have a very nice day yann |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Fascinating look at hockey and the ending took the image to another level-on'e own. sharyn |
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